Analysis of LIFE... swimming in fear

Tracey l Coleman 1969 (n.h.)



what do i have to do? to finally be free.  
spreading my ashes from the sand to the see.
see if you wade in , you get no rush, you are simply consumed with all that surrounds you. "like things on a shelf".
however  if you dive, it will cleanse you thoroughly of all lives debris.
Speeding ahead not feeling the wrath.
so if you had it to do all over again,
what would you do?
sink or swim?


Scheme AABACDEF
Poetic Form
Metre 111111110011 10110101101 11110111111100111101111101 10111111110011101 100111001 111111111001 1111 111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 389
Words 85
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 293
Words per stanza (avg) 80

About this poem

i wrote this a long time ago. i feel after all the passing years that it still resonates during those years and today as well.

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Written on January 30, 2024

Submitted by SOBAR33069 on January 30, 2024

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Tracey l Coleman

want to help people on their sober journey. want to open a "sobar" / MGC modern generation club. more…

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