Analysis of Listener



Please help me Lord to try and be myself. Seems I want to be someone else. The someone who's life ends in disaster. But eternal life is what I am after. Please help me Lord because I don't understand. Is that a curse two sides of a man. The one to do wrong the one to do right. One made for the day and one made for the night. But the one we know to be the best. Is the one who has his sins confessed. To give up life wasn't meant to be. Free with the Lord through eternity. Please help me Lord to really be myself. And put that old man back on the shelf. The one leading me is better than them all. He's always there to listen to my call.


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Poetic Form
Metre 111111011111111101111001010101111110111101110111011110101111011111110101110110111110110111110111111011111011010011111101101111110101101110111111110111
Characters 639
Words 134
Sentences 16
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 486
Words per line (avg) 134
Letters per stanza (avg) 486
Words per stanza (avg) 134

About this poem

There is always two voices coming at you. You must decide which one to listen to.

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Written on March 02, 2024

Submitted by Wbrooks431 on March 02, 2024

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