Analysis of Distant

Kelley Davies 1983 (Dallas)



Voices in my mind

Rummaging around in the basement

Vying for control

Misusing me, abusing my mind

I'm running from the pain

The fear is overwhelming

These wicked people are out for blood

They want my life

The fallen world is a sinking ship

She wants me to come underneath with her

To the shadow realms where things make no sense

She wants me dead

I love you, mother

Please be kind, remember me mother

I will forever love you


Scheme A X X A X X X X X B X X B B X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 10011 100010010 10101 010101011 110101 011010 110101111 1111 010110101 111110110 101111111 1111 11110 111010110 1101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 461
Words 104
Sentences 1
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 23
Words per stanza (avg) 5
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Submitted by kbdallas2020 on February 15, 2024

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