Analysis of Valentine

Kim Travis 1965 (Kogarah)



Oh tell me, oh my darling,
Will you be my Valentine?
Can you promise for forever
That you always will be mine?
When I'm old and tired and weary
Will you stay right by my side
And lend an arm to lean on
When my bones are getting tired?
Will you sit with me at sunrise
As we watch the day begin
Will you hold and kiss me gently
Let me feel the love within
We will hold our hands together
As we walk upon the shore
And talk about our dreams and plans
For life forever more.
And as the sun begins to set
We'll sit and dream again
And whisper words of love and hope
As we enjoy life's sweet refrain.

(Written by Kim Travis - February 2024)


Scheme XABACXXXXDCDBEXEXXXX C
Poetic Form
Metre 1111110 111110 11101010 111111 111010010 1111111 0111111 11111010 1111111 1110101 11101110 1110101 111101010 1110101 010110101 110101 01010111 110101 01011101 11011101 101110100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 646
Words 139
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 20, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 246
Words per stanza (avg) 65

About this poem

I wrote this poem today for my husband, Warren, for Valentine's Day. I thought it would be a good poem to submit for February.

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Written on February 14, 2024

Submitted by Rustyblue on February 14, 2024

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Kim Travis

As a child, I loved reading, writing and patterns. When I was 10, my dad helped me write my first poem. In 2006, I submitted my first online poem. I have written many since then but not submitted them. more…

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