Analysis of Sloth



Kick your blankets, get up! rain has come.
Grab your seeds head to garden.
Gather oxen, go plough, go back to our indigenous ways.
Reminisce archaic time, untie-knot with sloth!

Fertile East soil wave at black men
Black men! black men! come get your riches.
Black men! black men! we lived prior to technology.
Reminisce archaic time, untie-knot with sloth!

Spill bottle liquor, collect wood for fire, cook sorghum beer.
Throw carpets away, head to the kraal get cow dung.
What is google? black men! black men go consult elders.
Reminisce archaic time, untie-knot with sloth!

Sleep and sloth are tongue and saliva.
Only Jeff Bezos can hit the hay.


Scheme xxxA xxxA xxxA xx
Poetic Form
Metre 111011111 1111110 1010111111001001 01010101111 10111111 111111110 1111111010100 01010101111 110100111101101 110011101111 1110111110110 01010101111 101110010 10111101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 649
Words 125
Sentences 20
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 126
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

Native people need to go back to their old ways of living.

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Written on January 01, 2024

Submitted by thinamaxathi on February 10, 2024

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Thina Maxathi

Thina Maxathi Born on 26 December 1999 In South Africa, Cape Town, Kraaifontein more…

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