Analysis of Was One Loosed Today (Senryu)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



Was One Loosed Today   (Senryu)

Some people believe
Screws hold the world together
Was on loosed today

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   02/09/2024


Scheme X XXX X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 111011 11001 1101010 11101 10010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 146
Words 24
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 1
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 37
Words per stanza (avg) 10

About this poem

I wonder IF Numbers 16 And Revelation 18 have anything in common???For some silly reason My Father wants me to add Ezekiel 33…Go figure…I’ll let ya’ll decide for yourselves…

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Written on February 09, 2024

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on February 10, 2024

Modified by EdwinRayTanguma on February 10, 2024

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