Analysis of I loved for 8 years

Kay Sweeney 2004 (Ontario)



Nine months and I have what others call closure, but somewhere deep inside I can feel it’s not over.
You got a slap on the wrist and two years probation, but I’m the one who gets to live with it, till I get my own cremation.

I should be happy after I heard what you are pleading but it’s been so long I can’t say I even know that feeling. Maybe this is how it is till the day that I die I fake a smile everyday while I’m living a lie.

Why do I feel so bad that I got you in shit? I’m the victim you’re the suspect but my thighs are still slit. Sometimes late at night as I lie in my bed I hope you’re getting all the help of whatever is wrong in your head.

you left me in pain and you left me in tears I should hate your fucking guts but I loved you for eight years.


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Characters 790
Words 171
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 1, 1
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About this poem

This poem is about being in love with someone who once hurt you.

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Written on January 25, 2024

Submitted by kaidinces on January 25, 2024

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Kay Sweeney

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