Analysis of Can you see your star after your youth is gone

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



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Can you see your star after your youth is gone

Life In-between the notes of your favorite songs spread out in your heart soul and mind. Reflections of your best days growing up have a dreamed up fantasy of what you can become. So now back to your youthful present you have freedom and friends and no responsibilities. You have a girlfriend that opens magical doors for both of you and each new day holds a mystery for you and all around you. Not knowing can be scary sometimes however you don't need to rush it because once you are an adult you'll be that for the rest of your life. So make the most of all the new stuff on your horizon for the youthful magic won't last for ever. As life works its doings in you and your friends at different rates and levels they slowly move on and one day you'll be asking like the rest of us Where did my youthfulness go it seems like yesterday it was here.


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Characters 908
Words 175
Sentences 7
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 241
Words per line (avg) 58
Letters per stanza (avg) 361
Words per stanza (avg) 87
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Written on February 06, 2024

Submitted by rjenavy on February 06, 2024

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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