Analysis of War Subtracts and Never Adds



The victors own the spoils of war.
The losers are the spoils.
In warfare even when there’s draw.
The human loss the soul recoils.

War subtracts and never adds.
Its aim is never life but death.
It targets lives of fighting lads.
Once exalted, now seen as shibboleth.

So while we weep and while we mourn.
The aftermaths of human folly.
Let us pay heed to what is borne.
The human loss we cannot ever truly tally.


Scheme XAXA BCBC DEDE
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 01010111 010101 0110111 01010101 110101 11110111 11011101 101011110 11110111 01011010 11111111 0101110101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 414
Words 90
Sentences 12
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 26

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No human loss from warfare can we ever truly tally.

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Written on January 28, 2024

Submitted by karlcfolkes on January 28, 2024

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Karl Constantine FOLKES

Retired educator of Jamaican ancestry with a lifelong interest in composing poetry dealing particularly with the metaphysics of self-reflection; completed a dissertation in Children’s Literature in 1991 at New York University entitled: An Analysis of Wilhelm Grimm’s ‘Liebe Mili’ (translated into English as “Dear Mili”), Employing Von Franzian Methodological Processes of Analytical Psychology. The subject of the dissertation concerned the process of Individuation. more…

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