Analysis of To Gain A Successful Life.

Brijmohansajal 1946 (India)



Control of mind.........
And carefulness,
Dexterity along with patience.........
These are the basic needs,
Good remembrance,
Absence of negligence,
Ensuring all the aspects,
Considering advantages...........
Also disadvantages..........
After that only,
To start anything............
By aiming each step..........,
With a flood of enthusiasm,
Moving forward step by step,
Becomes a successful life...................


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Poetic Form
Metre 0111 01 010001110 110101 1010 101100 010101 01000100 100100 10110 1110 11011 10110100 1010111 0100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 417
Words 65
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 278
Words per stanza (avg) 51

About this poem

This poem is about control of mind, carefulness, dexterity and patience etc, for a successful life one has to be very conscious because success can't be achieved simply, for it we have to be alert to gain success with our skill.

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Written on January 27, 2024

Submitted by brijmohan_p on January 27, 2024

Modified by brijmohan_p on January 27, 2024

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Brijmohansajal

For writing this poem, I have got inspiration from manner less people, Though I can't teach them, but decided to write in this subject. First half was written and the rest half took long time. I am happy to do something in this way and show a path this way. more…

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