Analysis of You make me crazy.

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)



You make me crazy.

We all caught the same disease, and we were so close I could touch your nose; even the rose I gave you froze. We both bled from each other's wounds. When I show you, you don't care. It leaves me throwing punches in the air. So with the little bit of love you have left, could you share it with me? Then you can see your love is like lightning coming down from the sky, and look what it's doing to me; it's making me want to lay down and cry. But you are so lazy and shady. One thing you need to know is that I'm still a strong lady, and I'm not lazy or shady. 


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Characters 581
Words 124
Sentences 10
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 1
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 218
Words per line (avg) 61
Letters per stanza (avg) 218
Words per stanza (avg) 61

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All in a dream. Everything's there but there's something missing if you could make it into something it would make me happy.

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Written on January 21, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on January 21, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on January 21, 2024

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