Analysis of Love and pain

Amy Lake 1988 (Texas)



The love I feel is so real. The love I feel will I wish would make me heal. The love I feel is so strong. I've been feeling this way for so long. He doesn't care, he doesn't try, he doesn't love me like I like. He causes pain, he breaks my heart. I wish I never loved him, why did I start? I have to end this pain I feel,  I have to stop loving him but how?


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Characters 358
Words 79
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 261
Words per line (avg) 80
Letters per stanza (avg) 261
Words per stanza (avg) 80

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I'm in love with someone that doesn't feel the same way

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Written on January 20, 2024

Submitted by amyl.46243 on January 20, 2024

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