Analysis of The Hopeless Case



A mother
left crying
alone in her pew

Begging the Lord
for a miracle
new …

The only thing
he was good at
was being bad

Bus stations
train stations
corn maidens in drag

He came and he went
with the most
discordant rhyme

His sins
left uncounted
but marking the time

In Akron Ohio
his grifting
unwrapped

Those roads
in New Mexico
calling him back

The lights
and the sirens
again on their way

His thumb
in the wind
— Saint Jude in dismay

(The Breezeway: January, 2024)


Scheme XAB XXB AXX CCX XXD XXD EAX XEX XCF XXF X
Poetic Form
Metre 010 110 01001 1001 10100 1 0101 1111 1101 110 110 11001 11011 101 0101 11 110 11001 010010 11 01 11 0110 1011 01 0010 01111 11 001 11001 01100
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 482
Words 103
Sentences 1
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 1
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 34
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on January 19, 2024

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Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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