Analysis of As the Angels dance



The angels danced through dimensions of time
As their mother father God graced them devine
And their wings echoed from their hearts sublime
As they swirled through loves air breathing  their vine
Blooms of elegance whisped them away
In each other's arms they wanted to stay
And not Gods loving gaze could tare them astray
From each other's name was a twin of their tame
And the innocence that shon with such stars of loves gain
Vibrated echelons in desire of lights sacred flame
Nurtured the highest feelings awoke
And all who dreamt grew pure as they spoke
Their words like the softness of an unfolding rose
As the rays gentle nudge showed them to behold
And take all to heaven within their sweet hold


Scheme ABABCCCDEDFFGHH
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 0101101011 11101011101 0111011101 1111111011 111001101 0110111011 01110111101 11101101111 0010011111111 110001011101 100101001 011111111 111010110101 10110111101 01111001111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 702
Words 125
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 575
Words per stanza (avg) 126
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Written on January 17, 2024

Submitted by heathert.34240 on January 17, 2024

Modified by heathert.34240 on January 17, 2024

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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