Analysis of You (all people are suffering right now in the world)



I got a letter
another one per e-mail today
the headline read: You
I read the letter once
I didn’t think twice

I read what they wrote me
but I couldn’t take their letter seriously

I wrote a letter
another one with my e-mail-program today
the headline read: You
I sent the letter once
I didn’t think twice

I wrote what they wrote me
because I couldn’t take their letter seriously

they introduced themselves
I introduced myself
they told me how they found my e-mail-address
I told them how I found their e-mail-address
they spoke of spirit, dying, charity and donation
I spoke of spirit, dying, charity and donation
they wrote with heavy tears in their eyes and great sorrow in their hearts
I wrote with heavy tears in my eyes and great sorrow in my heart
they mentioned their doctor and their health
I mentioned my doctor and my health
they spoke of fund of $ 2’400’000 United States Dollars
I spoke of fund of CHF 2’400’000 Swiss Franc
they went on with the will of god and a faithful and god-fearing person
I went on with the will of god and a faithful and god-fearing person
they said: a lot of people are suffering right now in the world
I said: ALL PEOPLE ARE SUFFERING RIGHT NOW IN THE WORLD

I will wait to hear from you to see if you can handle this task with honesty and in good faith.

mr. m. k.


Scheme abCdE ff abCdE ff xxgghhxxiixxhhjj x b
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 010111101 0111 110101 1111 111111 11111101000 11010 01011111101 0111 110101 1111 111111 011111101000 10101 1011 1111111111 1111111111 11110101000010 11110101000010 1111010110110011 1111010110110011 110110011 110110011 11111010110 11111111 111101110010011010 111101110010011010 1101110110011001 11110110011001 111111111111101111000011 1011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,337
Words 256
Sentences 4
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 2, 5, 2, 16, 1, 1
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 147
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Written on January 16, 2024

Submitted by Kimi on January 16, 2024

Modified by Kimi on January 18, 2024

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