Analysis of Remaining with God

Richard Newton Sherrer 1951 (Easton)



Let what you heard from the start,
So that you abide in the Son;
Let it abide in your heart,
What He righteously has done.

Eternal life is promised,
That He had made unto us;
For the Father the truest,
Everlastingly as thus.

I write these things unto you,
Of those who try to deceive;
To lure what is not true,
Seducing what to believe.

The anointing you receive,
Needs not another to teach;
For if you firmly believe,
Deception will never reach.

The truth as you had been taught,
No lie is ever within;
What the blood of Christ has bought,
It is cleansing you of sin.

Have sureness when He appears,
Confidence that will not shrink;
Having no shame in your fears,
And only righteously think.

If you know He is righteous,
Of Him, you shall then be born;
And you righteously practice,
While on earth to sojourn.

Copyright © 2024 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB XCXC DEDE EFEF XGXG HIHI CXCX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 11101001 1101011 1110011 0101110 1111101 1010010 111 1111101 1111101 111111 0101101 01101 1101011 1111001 0101101 0111111 1111001 1011111 1110111 111101 1001111 1011011 0101001 1111110 1111111 0110010 111110 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 857
Words 191
Sentences 8
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 20

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God’s Children 1 John 2:24-29

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Written on January 15, 2024

Submitted by richardnsherrer on January 14, 2024

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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