Analysis of Tomorrow may Go Away

Alan J Caron 1958 (Swansea)



Tomorrow May Go Away

Live for today; tomorrow may go away. My biggest fear is that my dreams will all disappear. I will have nothing left, not even a tear. My time is short; it's near the end. My friends are old and gray, and they can't help me  anyway. Can you lend me just one minute and stay? That minute, to me, is a lifetime. I have no more rhymes; please give me a sign. I'm really not feeling fine. I will give you that one minute, my dear. I have a lot that I can spare. I will hold all your dreams. I will lock them up with a key. Because I love ❣️ you now can you see what you mean to me? Just close your eyes and you will be free. You won't need me.
P. S You never knew now you do.


Scheme X XX
Poetic Form Quinzaine  (33%)
Metre 011101 1101011101110111111101111101110011111110111110101111101111111001110111011111111101110110111111110111101111111111111111101011111111111111111011111111 111101111
Characters 698
Words 149
Sentences 19
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 2
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 171
Words per line (avg) 49
Letters per stanza (avg) 257
Words per stanza (avg) 74

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I don't think about my poems. They're all real they are part of my life. My life ain't a pretty one. That's why I can write these.

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Written on December 08, 2023

Submitted by Alanswansea2 on December 10, 2023

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