Analysis of Her



In the world full of people made of Stardust he founded his own cosmos.
She, she was the breath of his life, the purpose of his soul and the woman of value in his life.
 She, she made 18hrs look like a blink of an eye in which he saw his whole future.
 She, she was his own Library of Alexandria which never saw the flames and stored their little books of memories.
    But maybe, just maybe they met in the wrong dimension, a dimension where their love story was meant to be a classic tragic novel where the lovers were doomed by their own ambitions and wants.
 And soon, soon a day came, Mardi where his Library of Alexandria did see the flames and all that was left was the ashes, reminisce of their memories.
                                             -Divyanshi Jiwnani


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Characters 778
Words 144
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 82
Words per line (avg) 20
Letters per stanza (avg) 571
Words per stanza (avg) 138

About this poem

I wrote this poem after I heard my sister conversation with her friend who was talking about his ex with so much love and passion and that they had to break up because he was 28 and wanted to have a famiy and was living in Canada whereas she was 24 living in Jaipur,India and just wanted to focus on her ambitions at that time.

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Written on December 12, 2023

Submitted by diivyanshijiwnani1140 on December 19, 2023

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