Analysis of Lolo my souls´light



Lolo my soul´s light
He asleep under sun
In the afternoon, next to pine.

Lolo light from my eyes
With his shortest walk
And her hair copper bright.

Lolo angel from god
With your good looked
You don’t need a voice.

Lolo my faithful partner
You had a hard street life
I feel like your father.

I love you with my soul
I am thankful to god
For you crossed in my road.

Being together is our destiny
For all eternity.  


Scheme AXX XXA BXX CXC XBX DD
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 101101 0001111 11111 11101 001101 11011 1111 11101 111010 110111 111110 111111 111011 111011 10010110100 110100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 421
Words 91
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 54
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

This poem is for my pet, Lolo. He is my angel. He was a street dog from Argentina and he has a long story with me.

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Written on January 01, 2019

Submitted by nicolasandresdavi on December 14, 2023

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Nicolas Davi

I born in Buenos Aires, Argentina in 1980. I am poet 29 years ago. I publiqued a one book en 2021. I have 570 poem in spanish and this was my fifth poem in english. Thank you for this opportunity. more…

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