Analysis of Do you dare to live clean

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



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Do you dare to live clean

Through the sunlight of a new morning the truth that even we may not know is illuminated. Equal light upon those who live in the city or mountains the proof of the sun's goodness is in the warmth. Stare upon the nature's splendor  just outside your country door and let the feeling of freedom build up in you bringing your spirit to a level that wants to bubble out of you with exuberantion that it seems foreign to your heart and soul. The land as God made it like a good wholesome meal nourishes your heart mind and soul and brings back to your fingertips that of what your ancestors lived each day even just a 100'd years ago. The explanations needed in the wild life are different for the rules are different from the city jungle. Your heart and soul can breathe and at the end of the day your body may be spent but it will feel good. Take a page out of the book your ancestors wrote and accept the challenge of leaving the dirty cities and rejuvenate your life.


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Characters 1,006
Words 191
Sentences 7
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 268
Words per line (avg) 64
Letters per stanza (avg) 403
Words per stanza (avg) 96
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Written on December 29, 2023

Submitted by rjenavy on December 29, 2023

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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