Analysis of But What If I’m Said Leo (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tsnguma 1966 (Los Angeles CA)



But What If I’m said Leo   (Bussokusekika)

And what of twin flames
I am an Aquarius
Thus my twin is Leo
Could The Lion of Judah
Be considered my twin flame
But what if I’m said Leo

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   12/22/2023


Scheme X XXAXXA X
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101 01111 1110100 111110 1010110 1010111 1111110 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 229
Words 45
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 56
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

What a conundrum…Vould such a thing be possible???Two souls in one body…Edwin twin flame one…Dagesh, The Lion of Judah, twin flame two…The two olive trees aka two lamp stands…And I don’t even want to get into the paradox involving Tommy2Souls…

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Written on December 22, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on December 22, 2023

Modified by EdwinRayTanguma on December 22, 2023

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