Analysis of Laura's Fault



What is the age
of reality itself
Older than
a metaphor
Unreferenced
on a shelf

What is the distance
unmeasured from within
Spoken of
but never seen
A poets
dying whim

What is time uncounted
as numbers lose their clout
The hourglass
returned to sand
An abacus
in doubt

What is love ungifted
but feelings’ last excuse
To roam unlinked
between the chains
And blame it
—on the Muse

(Dreamsleep: December, 2023)


Scheme XAXXBA XXXXXX BBXBXB BXBXBX X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (48%)
Metre 1101 11001 101 0100 1 101 11010 1101 101 1101 010 101 11110 110111 010 0111 1100 01 1111 110101 111 0101 011 101 1010
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 417
Words 78
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 66
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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