Analysis of In Your Eyes



In Your Eyes

In your eyes my soul is lost,
I'm crazy about your lips for a long time,
I want to give you my love,
but you do not know that, nor can you know.

I haven't told you that I love you yet,
I really don't know what I've been waiting for until now,
when you're always on my mind,
but to tell you the truth, I'm afraid.

My behavior tells you everything,
even though we are pretending to be just friends,
when you are around, there is restlessness in the heart,
if you were mine, the universe would be mine.

Shyness, unfortunately, is my nature,
I write poems in which I am your love,
and not one can find a way to you,
a heart in love does not know how to manage.


Scheme X XXAX XXXX XXXX XAXX
Poetic Form
Metre 011 0111111 11001111011 1111111 1111111111 1101111111 11011111101011 111111 111101101 10101110 101110101111 1110111100001 1101010111 10010001110 1110011111 011110111 01011111110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 685
Words 159
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 101
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

"In Your Eyes" is a poem from a collection of poetry entitled "When you stay alone". If you liked it and want to order your copy of the book, you can through Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/dp/8690558810 Or support my work by buying me a coffee: https://www.buymeacoffee.com/zeraprinc You can also read my other poetry online: https://zeraprinc.com/index.php/poetry

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