Analysis of You
You killed my spirit
You murdered my heart
You enslaved my mind
Burden me with your lies
You choked my soul
You blinded my eyes
You didn't answer my cries
Why did you have to lie?
You made me miss you so much
You didn't hold me, I needed your touch
I use to love you so much, not anymore
because of your lies.
Scheme | ABCDEDDFGGHD |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11110 11011 10111 101111 1111 11011 1101011 111111 1111111 1101111011 1111111101 01111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 336 |
Words | 68 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 12 |
Lines Amount | 12 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 240 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 64 |
About this poem
I wrote this poem after experiencing my first heartbreak.
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