Analysis of Sunflower



My sunflowers didn't flourish that year.
I planted them in spring kept them safe from sun and rain.

I tried to help you thrive but the conditions didn't satisfy your unique and particular need for the simple sun and rain; you see without these certain things it will drive you to insane and never flourish the same again.

I learnt from my mistakes and corrected your new place.

I planted my sunflowers in spring Directly in the sun and in reach of rain. now I have learnt new ways and needs she will flourish again.


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Characters 521
Words 103
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 82
Words per line (avg) 19
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 24

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BPD and not being in the right place when younger so unable to flourish

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Written on November 02, 2023

Submitted by Ecroughton1 on November 02, 2023

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Sunflower

BPD/ childhood trauma. About not being safe but learning new things to help you thrive again. more…

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