Analysis of Make me
Clifford Lisuza 2004 (Nairobi)
Hey, with that outlook of a queen that you give you make the world look so small though it's so big and with that, it makes me feel like I may fail to be among the best people you have ever met, but I know, am the best of lovers you have ever had,
East and West were meant to be directions, but east and west are the sequences that my mind goes through due to the much fully thinking of you and I find it hard to put it in words of how:
I can't Concentrate when am with you,
I fail to eat because every time am full of you, I fail to drink cause every time am drunk of you and am also filled with you,
Make me write a thousand reasons of why I was brought into this world to be with you,
Make me be the enemy of the devil who wishes to take you away from me,
Let me be the angel who pushes you close to me,
Make me be the reason of why you still think of living the next seventy years of your life,
Make me be the author of a love story of me and you with an end of living in the world of immortality,
Make me be your life's future thought, and I would win you not with words, but with the sweetest love that a man would be able to offer even if it means with life
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Metre | 11111011111101111111101111111111110101101110111110111011101 1010111010110110100111111101101011011111110111 11101111 1111011001111111111100111110110111 111010101111101111111 111010010101101110111 1110101101111 11101011111110011001111 11101010110110111111000110100 111111010111111111010110111101101011111 |
Characters | 1,171 |
Words | 259 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 10 |
Lines Amount | 10 |
Letters per line (avg) | 90 |
Words per line (avg) | 25 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 895 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 250 |
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