Analysis of Make me

Clifford Lisuza 2004 (Nairobi)



Hey, with that outlook of a queen that you give you make the world look so small though it's so big and with that, it makes me feel like I may fail to be among the best people you have ever met, but I know, am the best of lovers you have ever had,
East and West were meant to be directions, but east and west are the sequences that my mind goes through due to the much fully thinking of you and I find it hard to put it in words of how:
I can't Concentrate when am with you,
I fail to eat because every time am full of you, I fail to drink cause every time am drunk of you and am also filled with you,
Make me write a thousand reasons of why I was brought into this world to be with you,
Make me be the enemy of the devil who wishes to take you away from me,
Let me be the angel who pushes you close to me,
Make me be the reason of why you still think of living the next seventy years of your life,
Make me be the author of a love story of me and you with an end of living in the world of immortality,
Make me be your life's future thought, and I would win you not with words, but with the sweetest love that a man would be able to offer even if it means with life


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Poetic Form
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Characters 1,171
Words 259
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 90
Words per line (avg) 25
Letters per stanza (avg) 895
Words per stanza (avg) 250

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Submitted by cliffordlisuza on November 08, 2023

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