Analysis of First Night



Cedars cease to fall like thunder
In the forest of evergreens when
Cruel men divide their plunder-
But you stole away my breath.
I saw you standing there
My tree was felled
You cut me down.

My defenses were gone-
I showed you my soul
How I’m not always all that strong.
Collecting the branches after the storm
You gathered me in like kindling for fire.
A spark was found that night
Standing out in the street with you.

You catch a glimpse of me in the sideview
The calm, cool veil
My heart sings seeing you smile beside me
The passenger seat, Nightingale.


Scheme AXAXXXX XXXXAXX XBXB
Poetic Form
Metre 10111110 00101101 10101110 1110111 111101 1111 1111 101001 11111 1111111 0100101001 11010110110 011111 10100111 110111001 0111 1111011011 01001100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 565
Words 111
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 4
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 147
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Written on November 10, 2022

Submitted by Thomas.Slivinski on November 22, 2023

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