Analysis of Bridge



Forgive me, O barren land,
But barren you shall yet remain.
For I am old and cannot sow,
Nor reap from you this season's grain.

The village lads are young and strong,
But will not help me in my need.
Their land is barren, too, but they,
Have not enough to buy the seed.

I would hire them but I,
Know not if they would care to keep,
A bargain with a helpless man,
Know not if they would share the reap.

In my dreams I see a place,
Where pearly rice and maize abound,
And fields of golden, juicy wheat,
Swaying in the wind are found.

But far away this heaven is,
Far across a valley wide,
And nought with which to build a bridge,
No way to cross the great divide.

Beside the pit a holy stone,
Has stood for long as I recall,
Pitted, cracked, but standing tall,
It rears above the deadly fall.

Dug into the weathered stone,
An ancient hand is legible,
'Bridge', it says, and beneath,
It tells a tale incredible.

'Listen, thee', the writing goes,
'For we have found a way.
As years ago we passed across,
So you shall do today.'

'Come all ye weary, troubled men,
Who live in these lands.
Come line up here and close your eyes,
And tightly clasp your hands.'

'You must step across as one,
All of you together,
For if even one dissents,
Then all fall to the nether.'

'But if in trust and in good faith,
As one, together you shall tread,
A bridge will form under your feet,
And you shall walk across instead.'

So every night, in my dream,
A hundred men here come,
But teeter so and do not cross,
And to distrust succumb.

Perhaps no different is my tale,
Perhaps I must now learn,
To trust in trust and step ahead,
And this heaven, earn.

Too many walls, I have built,
Too many bricks have spent,
For bricks that do not bridges build,
Indeed to walls are lent.

Come, now let us build that bridge,
Now, let us swallow pride,
Bury feuds, enmities,
Set distrust aside.

Not far away, this heaven is,
Not as far as once it seemed,
Not far away this paradise,
This land of which I dreamed.


Scheme XAXA XBCB XDXD XEFE GHIH JKKK JLXL XCMC XNXN XOXO XPFP XQMQ XRPR XSXS IHXH GTXT
Poetic Form Quatrain  (94%)
Metre 0111101 11011101 11110101 11111101 01011101 11111011 11110111 11011101 1110111 11111111 01010101 11111101 0111101 11010101 01110101 1000111 11011101 1010101 01111101 11110101 01010101 1111111 1011101 11010101 1010101 11011100 111001 11010100 1010101 111101 11011101 111101 11110101 11011 11110111 010111 1110111 111010 1110101 1111010 11010011 11010111 01111011 01110101 11001011 010111 11010111 010101 011100111 011111 11010101 01101 1101111 110111 11111101 011111 1111111 111101 101100 10101 11011101 1111111 1101110 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,988
Words 458
Sentences 20
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 64
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 94
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

So many of our problems can be solved with a bit of compassion and trust. The poem tries to convey that a better world is just within our reach.

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Written on September 15, 2009

Submitted by ujwalsoni on November 17, 2023

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