Analysis of Poem of the heart



To walk on your pettled path
Is to feel the freshness of your spring of mind

To feel your soft hands in mine
Is to melt clots and cells into your flourishing bloodstream of fresh existence.

To kiss your tender lips
Is to raise a new cycle of time line into my open heart

To close my eyes in your presence
Is to restful night, a billion soft dreams of each of your precious living days.

To talk to you alone
Is to see your soul lighten with grace of your sweet face recognised in all its worth.

To leave with you in natural time
For supernatural heavens unknown
Is to adventure through the ends of the world to reach our embraced home.


Scheme XX XA XX AX BX XBX
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 11101011111 1111101 111101011100111010 111101 1110110111011101 11110110 1110101011111110101 111101 111111011111110111 111101001 101001001 110101011011110011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 642
Words 131
Sentences 5
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Written on December 05, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on December 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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