Analysis of What is your dream

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



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What is your dream

I met you once and that was enough to know your history. In a vision I saw how you and your ancestors were always misunderstood and not given any consideration.  Through all that they still looked towards the sky with the wonderment like all others. They dreamed just like everyone else for a better time among all others to accept the love you had to offer. The crabgrass grows just as well among the more desirable grass so why can't you. You long to find someone to fall in love with like all others and you believe your trust and patience will pay off. Interms of the human factor it seems antiproductive to show no support for one of their own. As the sun rises and sets many times you will keep dreaming that one day you'll find yours and others will realize that you are valuable to society. Until then you'll keep staring at the full moon.


Scheme XX X
Poetic Form Quinzaine  (33%)
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Characters 880
Words 164
Sentences 9
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 235
Words per line (avg) 55
Letters per stanza (avg) 352
Words per stanza (avg) 82
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Written on December 03, 2023

Submitted by rjenavy on December 03, 2023

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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