Analysis of Whispering loudly

Janice Center 1976 (Phoenix)



I want to let you know I come very confused
I come shattered and torn from the years of abuse
It is not that I have not tried to make my intentions clear
Could it have been my voice you somehow did not hear
I've always wanted in ife  all the good I could possess
Having someone around who relieves all unwanted stress
Don't listen to what I say nor as I do
For me I'm only me and you are only you


Scheme ABCDEEFF
Poetic Form
Metre 111111111001 111001101101 111111111110101 11111111111 1110011011101 1010110110101 11011111111 111101011101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 396
Words 83
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 310
Words per stanza (avg) 84

About this poem

I wrote this poem when I felt like no one was hearing me even though I was speaking clearly so these words came out and I put it on a page and Bam there you have it..

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Written on August 03, 2016

Submitted by jcenter6410 on November 30, 2023

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Janice Center

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