Analysis of Over Paw Paw Eri’s House (Bussokusekika)
Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)
Over Paw Paw Eri’s House (Bussokusekika)
My granddaughter knew
About Texas well before
I even told her
She spoke after I asked her
If she remembers the cloud
Over Paw-Paw Eri’s house
Edwin Tanguma Aka Dagesh
| Scheme | X XXAAXX X |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1011111 1101 0110101 11010 1110110 1101001 101111 10010101 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 220 |
| Words | 39 |
| Sentences | 1 |
| Stanzas | 3 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 6, 1 |
| Lines Amount | 8 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 21 |
| Words per line (avg) | 5 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 56 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 14 |
About this poem
We’ll…I felt as IF I needed to ask my granddaughter Sara IF I could make a video of her describing the dark cloud with a perfect circle on its bottom over my house…But I believe that it is no longer necessary…IF by chance anyone is interested…Feel free to ask her about it…She even brought up the Lahaina fire…And I felt compelled to tell her about the Brunot Island incident…I even told her that I believe the cloud is known as a Merkabah or Merkavah…I wonder IF she even remembers its name???I told her that the Brunot Island fire occurred a day after the dark cloud over my house…I didn’t have the heart to tell her that the Lahaina fire happening after I posted a video of the Degüello horn rendition of a storm over a plain on Treasurenet. com…I told her that I believe that they are her Paw Paw Eri’s friends…Y si quieren…Pregúntale que se piensa cuando se hace calor…Y porque su Paw Paw Eri se siente que se tiene que ir de vacaciones a Texas…Haber y si un inocente se puede mentir como un adulto…Como yo siempre te he mentido a ti…Se pueden creer lo que le da la gana…Pregunta la y verás…Quien está diciendo la verdad???Yo o los que dices que es tu familia espiritual???Scripture to reference Psalms 8:2-9…Quien está loco y quien es el mentiroso???Hey…A ti Bertha…A ti te estoy hablando…Para mi…Nunca te quiero decir mierda… more »
Written on November 17, 2023
Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on November 17, 2023
Modified by EdwinRayTanguma on November 17, 2023
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