Analysis of Sworded eyes

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



Twas a golden sword
Dear maiden fare
That etched your eyes
To the other tear
From which your spirit
Arrived swift here
To look upon
This mare and squire
Whom strong of arm
Yet soft his aspire
Took your lips
Upon his heart
Coursed your skin
In empowering brought
Love and flower
Jar and bread
And space of beauty
To lay your head
And placed your ring
Bestowed and blead
On the day far off
Together we'll be fled


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Poetic Form
Metre 10101 1101 1111 10101 11110 0111 1101 1101 1111 11101 111 0111 111 001001 1010 101 01110 1111 0111 0101 10111 010111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 414
Words 83
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 331
Words per stanza (avg) 79
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Written on November 17, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on November 17, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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