Analysis of Restless



Restless as I toss and turn. So many emotions thoughts whirlwind around my mind, waves batter my logic brain receptors battle the heart; warm blood sending tingles and rigid burst down the neck between my shoulders around my spine through the vascular to the chest.
In the silence flashbacks of nostalgic memories, and conversation snippets and longplay repeat.
One of these nights where I miss my Wis to the point of no sleep,  thoughts get deep
Silence gets loud, and the body cold; no heat from your body or feet sinking in the sheets ain't the same, I toss turn yawn turn toss wrapped in comfortable isolation am I being strong or weak? The fake scream strong when weakness is really meek, uncomfortable me fighting me instead of saying asking bae come lay with me!
My imagination's tormenting me I hear your voice turn to see your face, but you're nowhere near. I thought caught a glimpse of you in the mirror, did a double take the image disappeared like smoke evaporates my love I need you near reduced to tears. Restless, I toss and turn yearning long for you instead I'm left with the sum of all my fears!


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Poetic Form
Metre 10111011100101101111101101010100111101010110101110011110100101 0010110101000010100101 111111111101111111 1011001011111101110001101111111101000010111011101111101101010001101011101011111 1110111111111111111110111001010101010011101011111101111011011011101111011111
Characters 1,115
Words 203
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 178
Words per line (avg) 40
Letters per stanza (avg) 891
Words per stanza (avg) 201

About this poem

A man accepting and admitting his fear as well as error.

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Written on November 17, 2023

Submitted by BiggCezar374# on November 17, 2023

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