Analysis of Vintage Treasures: Pages of Passion Between Us



"Oh, my beloved, your presence ignites my weary soul,
Like tinder catching first sparks, slowly kindling to whole.
Your eyes hold galaxies that draw me into their spell,
Each moment with you, my heart knows perfectly well.

Our bond transcends the limits of time and mortal years,
Through every joy and sorrow, still you quiet my fears.  
My love, you are the poetry penned in fate's own hand,
Our souls twin flames, forever linked, understand.

If I could hold eternity in my grasp as I hold you near,
Through all life's storms, I'd weather, knowing your heart is here.
You are the harbor I've sought since time itself began,
My soul's homecoming to cherish our spirits' clan.  

Like a vintage novel, thumbed through times unnumbered,
You gift me new treasures whenever we're engendered.  
Oh, my love, you unlock the deepest truths I've yet to discern,
With you, life's ragged pages turn and turn.  

My days empty without you are but hollow shells,
You ignite my passions like pages fanned in old tomes tells.
Lost scripts lighting up for the first time in centuries streaming,
Our love, a timeworn binding newly gleaming.

You spur this pen to etch our story for the ages' see,
To chart the tidal heights scaled, fathomless depths we sound at sea.
Though words may fail to capture your exquisite light in full,
I'll spill endless ink to trace your form, my heart's blood pull.

Come, let us author the next chapter together, my fair muse,
Allow me to sculpt your image in verse that shall never bruise.
I'll quote your beauty like bards of old in couplets did of yore,
That generations may know a love for all time's shore."

The poem is part of a full version found in the book “Homo Sapiens” Part Part I - XVIII, written by Mawphniang Napoleon. This book is part of the popular “Homo Sapiens” book series, which can be purchased online at various online bookstores, such as Amazon. The book is available for purchase for those who are interested in reading the complete version of the poem. Remember to get all the books from the “Homo Sapiens” series, as well as other books by the same author.   So, don’t hesitate and get a copy today from one of the many online bookstores.   Khublei Shihajar Nguh,  (Dhanewad  )(Thank you )


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Poetic Form
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Characters 2,277
Words 446
Sentences 20
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 60
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 217
Words per stanza (avg) 50

About this poem

This poignant poem beautifully explores the enduring nature of love, comparing it to timeless elements like galaxies and vintage novels. The verses convey a deep connection that transcends mortal years, echoing a profound commitment to weather life's storms together. The poet's desire to etch their story for the ages reflects a timeless love story, inviting the beloved to co-author the next chapter in this eternal journey.

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Written on October 29, 2018

Submitted by Mawphniang.Napoleon on November 12, 2023

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Mawphniang Napoleon

Mawphniang is a person who is always striving to live life to the fullest. He is someone who is always open to new ideas and ways of living and is unafraid to take risks in order to explore the unknown. He is passionate about life and is always looking for ways to make use of his time and energy. He has an inquisitive nature, and is always looking for answers to life's mysteries and questions. Though Mawphniang does not pretend to have all the answers, he is determined to taste life and live a simple life, without overcomplicating things. He's a person who appreciates the small moments and cherishes the little things in life. He enjoys spending time in nature, exploring the world, and connecting with people. He is a person who is always up for a new adventure and never stops learning. He is on a daily journey of self-discovery, trying to make sense of the world and his place in it. more…

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