Analysis of Vintage Treasures: Pages of Passion Between Us
"Oh, my beloved, your presence ignites my weary soul,
Like tinder catching first sparks, slowly kindling to whole.
Your eyes hold galaxies that draw me into their spell,
Each moment with you, my heart knows perfectly well.
Our bond transcends the limits of time and mortal years,
Through every joy and sorrow, still you quiet my fears.
My love, you are the poetry penned in fate's own hand,
Our souls twin flames, forever linked, understand.
If I could hold eternity in my grasp as I hold you near,
Through all life's storms, I'd weather, knowing your heart is here.
You are the harbor I've sought since time itself began,
My soul's homecoming to cherish our spirits' clan.
Like a vintage novel, thumbed through times unnumbered,
You gift me new treasures whenever we're engendered.
Oh, my love, you unlock the deepest truths I've yet to discern,
With you, life's ragged pages turn and turn.
My days empty without you are but hollow shells,
You ignite my passions like pages fanned in old tomes tells.
Lost scripts lighting up for the first time in centuries streaming,
Our love, a timeworn binding newly gleaming.
You spur this pen to etch our story for the ages' see,
To chart the tidal heights scaled, fathomless depths we sound at sea.
Though words may fail to capture your exquisite light in full,
I'll spill endless ink to trace your form, my heart's blood pull.
Come, let us author the next chapter together, my fair muse,
Allow me to sculpt your image in verse that shall never bruise.
I'll quote your beauty like bards of old in couplets did of yore,
That generations may know a love for all time's shore."
The poem is part of a full version found in the book “Homo Sapiens” Part Part I - XVIII, written by Mawphniang Napoleon. This book is part of the popular “Homo Sapiens” book series, which can be purchased online at various online bookstores, such as Amazon. The book is available for purchase for those who are interested in reading the complete version of the poem. Remember to get all the books from the “Homo Sapiens” series, as well as other books by the same author. So, don’t hesitate and get a copy today from one of the many online bookstores. Khublei Shihajar Nguh, (Dhanewad )(Thank you )
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1101110011101 1101011101011 1111001110111 110111111001 10101010110101 11001010111011 1111010010111 10111010101 1111010001111111 1111110101111 1101011110101 111011010101 1010101111 1111100101010 111101010111101 1111010101 111001111101 10111011010111 111011011010010 10101101010 111111101010101 1101011111111 11111101100101 1110111111111 111100110010111 011111100111101 11110111101111 101011011111 01011101101001101001111101101001111101001010011011110111001111100110100110111110001000110101001011101101010010111101101101110010100111101011111111 |
Characters | 2,277 |
Words | 446 |
Sentences | 20 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1 |
Lines Amount | 29 |
Letters per line (avg) | 60 |
Words per line (avg) | 14 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 217 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 50 |
About this poem
This poignant poem beautifully explores the enduring nature of love, comparing it to timeless elements like galaxies and vintage novels. The verses convey a deep connection that transcends mortal years, echoing a profound commitment to weather life's storms together. The poet's desire to etch their story for the ages reflects a timeless love story, inviting the beloved to co-author the next chapter in this eternal journey.
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Written on October 29, 2018
Submitted by Mawphniang.Napoleon on November 12, 2023
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