Analysis of Fake friends

Fake friends 2008 (kleinmond)



They always hurt you at the end,
and you will hate that person you once called a friend.
When they need you they always ask for help,
but when you need them.
Tell me where is your so called friend?
well i have the answer for you,
they just used you it's true

They dont care about what you feel or what you do.
They just lie and lie,
but never tell the thruth.
But how can i blame them for using you,
becauce it's obvios your the fool.
You fell in thier trap,
and did'nt think of the next step.

They meddled with your mind,
and told you your the omly guy,
and once they were done with you.
They took thier fame,
and thier the once who started acting cool.
Your forgottan becauce they stole your sptolight,
and left with losers who could barely fight.

You carried  thier bags and did thier homework,
That us the thruth.
Now who is the fool.
Your twears did nothing and you knew,
that you will make them pay for what they did to you.
In the exams you got an A+.

But what did they get,
not even an F.
They sucked in the test,
and you did'nt understand.
That you suddenly had a plan.
You studied hard,
and was on the top student of your class

You fininshed school,
and became a bilionare its thruth,
and you went to your hometown,
looking for that fools,
and to your amazement they were actualy fools.
and gues what they did'nt even finish school.

They looked at you,
asking you how could it be.
are you realy this cool,
You laughed in thier face,
Saying it is just a game.
and i made it through the pain

And now you started with the game
your now at level 2,
And i finished and played by the rules.
You just have 98 to go,
can you make it,
well it is up to you


Scheme AAXXABB BCDBEXX XCBFEAX XDEBBX XXXXXXX EDXGGE BXEXFX FXGXXB
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 011111011101 111111111 11111 11111111 11101011 111111 111011111111 11101 110101 1111111101 111101 110101 0111011 11111 0111011 0110111 11101 01001110101 1111111 0111011101 11010101101 1101 11101 11110011 111111111111 00011110 11111 11011 11001 01101 11100101 1101 0110110111 111 0010111 011111 10111 0110101011 0111110101 1111 1011111 11111 110101 1011101 0111101 01110101 11110 011001101 11111 1111 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,664
Words 384
Sentences 23
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 7, 6, 7, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 52
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 159
Words per stanza (avg) 41

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It is about your friends who just used you.

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Submitted by Remeezelbruintjies123 on October 25, 2023

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