Analysis of Art out of agony



My pain is too much to bare
So with you I will share
My hurt will bring us down
My hurt is the shovel that pierces the dirt
Preparing to lay me in the ground
Sinking slowly, swimming in a weighted vest
No matter how hard I try its pointless to resist
I tried to do my best
And now I'm swimming with the fish
At my wake I will be in rare form
A smile you can't take on a body that can't be warmed
In a room with family and close friends
Swearing to God my life was take from them?
Missed a whole lot when I am gone
Sure I will be missed just as sure as I will be wrong
I was there all along
I was there
All along


Scheme AABCDEFEGHIJKLMMAM
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 111111 111111 1110101101 010111001 10101000101 1101111110101 111111 01110101 111111011 0111110101111 0011100011 1011111111 10111111 1111111111111 111101 111 101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 612
Words 136
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 473
Words per stanza (avg) 134

About this poem

I wrote this poem from the perspective of my identical twin brother who committed suicide in 2007

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Written on June 24, 2017

Submitted by Chevyjracine on October 05, 2023

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