Analysis of A feeling of existence
With this pain I hold
Free me from this misery
Heal me from my burdens
As i shed tear drops
As i pretend to be okay
My worry is not whom will ask me if i am okay or who will notice my absence
I have pain in my heart I cannot express
I feel a dark cloud covering my "happy" moment
I am tired of pretending
My only honest peace right now is through music
I wish I could rush the days and pain
Away but I can't, so why pretend?
My state of mind is not okay
Crying to sleep won't help either
Rip this person I have become apart
I feel lost in my own body
My identity has been robbed
As I move to the beat
Does my absence bother you?
I feel incomplete
Call it a change of season I guess
I can try but that part of me, you knew would never come back
She's gone
| Scheme | XAX XBX CXXX XX BXX AXD XDCXX |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 11111 1111100 111110 11111 1101111 110111111111111110110 11101111001 1101110011010 11101010 110101111110 111110101 011111101 1111111 10111110 1110110101 11101110 10100111 111101 1110101 11001 110111011 111111111111011 11 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 781 |
| Words | 189 |
| Sentences | 3 |
| Stanzas | 7 |
| Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 4, 2, 3, 3, 5 |
| Lines Amount | 23 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
| Words per line (avg) | 7 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 83 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 23 |
About this poem
The poem is about a void that cannot be filled by existing "love". The eco silence of a room as you seem to smile from a distance, tears is you nightmares and laughter in the dreams. It connects touches in our hearts and love in disguise.
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