Analysis of Ebony and BLue



I rise with you in my bed.

I held you like the morning bird who couldn’t fly completely.

melted in your palms like wax

I remembered you

We met last night.

I called you Blue.

You called me Ebony.

You are the artistic marine life of the reservoir.

I was the dark core of the Tree of Life.

The tension shot straight into our eyes.

And the heat enticed us to get closer.

And just like magic, the universe pulled us together.

The rivers between us are bending and falling.

Unable to grasp what we’ve got

From the smell of eggs and bacon

And the sight of your hair

I am tender.

And so are you.

Just like the oceans that separated us

Out of all seven seas and the Atlantis that no one can see anymore

We’ve sailed ship to reunite.

And it never fails to make me quiver in heat.

I was the Ebony

And you are the Blue

I lumbered through the woods of my rooted trust and love.

And you were hydrated.

Our fluidity made both of us one.

The only ones

A love that runs through our veins like the streams of South America

Long and nonstop

A midnight rendezvous

Having the Devil’s food cake and eating too

Mi casa es tu casa.

My pleasure is your pleasure.

Hours of soft touching and embrace

You completed my puzzle.

And created art that even the richest can’t buy

You may not know it.

Maybe I don’t know myself.

But I’ve seen you before.

Do you remember me?

Here I am.

And there you are.

Glistening under the Chandler sun

In the Presidential Suite

Looking over the army of perfect housewives and beer dads  

For the longest time

I spent my life largely asleep.

But waking up next to you opened my eyes to the fruits of my world.

I remember you.

You were the deepest space between all seven continents.

And I was the deepest core of the army of tropical trees in the WiI’mWest.

When you start to kiss

I’m in complete bliss and distraction.

When I start to kiss

You run wild in pure imagination.

I don’t remember much from last night.

But we remembered each other.

It felt like visiting an old company.

homey and cozy

You cooled me down.

And I burned you up.

Tell me, my love.

Can we I’me this one night last forever?

I’m usually not the desperate type.

And neither are you.

But you intoxicated me and led me towards addiction.

You were as red as ancient wine.

And I was as green as the mindful bud.

Ebony in blue

Me and you

The darkest core of the Tree

The deepest caves of the sea


Scheme A B X C D C B E X X F F X X G X F C X H D I B C J K G X L X C C L F X X X X X H B X E G I X X X X C X A M G M G D F B B X X J F X C G X K C C B B
Poetic Form
Metre 1111011 11110101111010 1001111 10101 1111 1111 111100 1100100111010 1101110111 0101101101 0010111110 0111001011010 010011110010 01011111 10111010 001111 1110 0111 1101011001 111101000101111101 111101 011011111001 110100 01101 111011110101 01010 10010011111 0101 01111101101110100 101 0110 10010110101 1101110 1101110 101110001 1010110 0010111001011 11111 101111 111101 110101 111 0111 100100101 000101 10100101011011 10101 11111001 11011111011101111 10101 10010101110100 0110101101011001001 11111 100110010 11111 111010010 110101111 11010110 11110011100 10010 1111 01111 1111 1111111010 1100010101 01011 110100101101010 10111101 0111110101 10001 101 0101101 0101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,614
Words 608
Sentences 47
Stanzas 73
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 73
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 25
Words per stanza (avg) 6

About this poem

A love that can be contradictive and unifying all at once.

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Written on October 26, 2023

Submitted by jackson0488 on October 26, 2023

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