Analysis of Wings in the dappled air



On the archangels wings the sunlight dappled it's glare
She was flying so proudly as she felt light through her hair
The peace from the oceans lept through her soft hands
Her beauty so fair it put whales in a dream trance
She floated on the land filled with flowers and grass
Looking for lost souls that felt sorrows alas tis alas
She found a loley child eating a pair
And blessed her with sweetness of her angelic stare
The child bounced away so she took to the air
And deeper came the sunset that she followed, love to bare


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Poetic Form
Metre 1010101111 11101101111101 01101011011 010111110011 110101111001 10111111001101 110111001 01011010101 01101111101 0101011110111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 525
Words 100
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 424
Words per stanza (avg) 100
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Written on October 20, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 20, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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