Analysis of The Elephants lullaby



Hush cloudy elephant
Play in the sky
I see you running
And feel how you try
To tell us you're ok
That God is nearby
And the stars shine so happily
In your glistening eye
So hush cloudy elephant
Play in the sky

Hush cloudy elephant
Can we ask you why
We love you so much
And wish you could find
All the baby elephants
Etched into skies
Sweet rhyming lullaby
Don't make my heart cry
So hush cloudy elephant
Play in the sky

Hush cloudy elephant
Your family awaits
Digging little castles
And opening their gates
Find the sweetest flowers
As you rush along
And fluffy animals
Bring you their song
So hush cloudy elephant
Play all day long


Scheme ABxbxbxbAB AbxxxxbbAB AcdcxedeAe
Poetic Form Tetractys  (33%)
Etheree  (27%)
Metre 110100 1001 11110 01111 111111 11111 00111100 011001 1110100 1001 110100 11111 11111 01111 1010100 1011 11010 11111 1110100 1001 110100 110001 101010 010011 101010 11101 010100 1111 1110100 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 637
Words 124
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 10, 10, 10
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 171
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Written on October 20, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 20, 2023

Modified by heathert.34240 on October 20, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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