Analysis of Adrift 2



Sometimes I feel my life's adrift
On oceans of my thoughts.
No matter how the wind will shift,
My stomach fills with knots.

Sometimes I'm like hot-air balloons
Adrift with clouds of hope.
As wind plays on some lonely tunes
And I try hard to cope.

But there are times, adrift in space
I watch the starlit view
And dreams of mine begin to race;
That life cannot subdue.


Scheme AXAX BCBC DEDE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 01111101 110111 11010111 110111 01111101 011111 11111101 011111 11110101 110101 01110111 111001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 369
Words 77
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Written on October 17, 2023

Submitted by stevec.24118 on October 17, 2023

Modified by stevec.24118 on October 17, 2023

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