Analysis of Without You

Willibard Muvangua 1994 (Omaruru)



I can't find my way.
Everyday seems the same.
I keep thinking of yesterday.
When there was no one to blame.

Without you I'm lost.
The world means nothing.
Success went broke,
 and love got buried.

The globe losses nothing without me.
Thou I fear without you.
I might so see no brighter future.
You are my only cure my treasure.

Lost and never found.
But we were found and forever lost.
Your are my other half.
We make one together.

Without you I'm in need.
Love is all I bleed.
You took the lead.
Just to mislead my heart.

Thanks to this God given art.
My world is no longer apart.


Scheme ABAB CXXD XXEE XCXE DDXF FF
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 101101 1110110 1111111 01111 01110 0111 01110 011010011 111011 111111010 111101110 10101 110100101 111101 111010 011101 11111 1101 110111 1111101 11111001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 586
Words 138
Sentences 21
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 74
Words per stanza (avg) 19

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This is my first entry, it's about my recovery from lost love

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Written on September 15, 2023

Submitted by muvanguawillibard on September 15, 2023

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