Analysis of That soul I can't have

Ofentse Masela 2009 (Rustenburg)



To the most beautiful girl I'd ever seen
My heart skips a beat whenever I saw you
You're the most beautiful girl I'd ever seen
Your face reminds me of a beautiful girl I'd once knew
Your claim spirit reminds me of the ocean
Strong and claim it is

Your heart is as kind as your soul
Always helping those indeed
Young and old they maybe
Courageous and smart you are

You and I are like water and oil
Fire and ice
Two souls from separate worlds
But our hearts will always be together
No matter who you are
No matter what you are

You will always held a special place in my heart
You will always be a very special person to me
No matter where you are
No matter who you're with
I'll always you


Scheme ABABXX XXCD XXXXDD XCDXB
Poetic Form
Metre 10110011101 11101010111 10110011101 11011101001111 11100111010 10111 11111111 110101 101110 0100111 101111001 1001 111101 1101111010 110111 110111 11110101011 1111010101011 110111 110111 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 699
Words 149
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 6, 5
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 136
Words per stanza (avg) 34

About this poem

About a girl and a boy who loved each other but they never could be together because of who they are

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Written on September 13, 2023

Submitted by Ofentsemasela47 on September 13, 2023

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