Analysis of Family tree.
NB 1998 (Uk)
A family tree I have started,
Still I feel a bit disheartened.
A tree of my own id love to make,
Though I feel such a heavy heart ache.
Because no children have came yet,
So I still make my self so upset.
A girl called Renae I’d love to bare,
With tons and tons of jet black hair.
A boy called Peter with hair like his dad,
He hasn’t came yet which is why I’m still sad.
But I don’t mind the gender I have,
I just hope and pray it doesn’t drag.
I’d be a good mother and always be there,
Which is why I still find is so unfair.
He’d be a good dad and always play,
Which is why everyday I ask god and pray.
So please god hear me and take the weight off my shoulders
I’d love to be buying pink or blue strollers.
Scheme | XX AA BB CC DD XX CC EE FF |
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Poetic Form | Couplet |
Metre | 010011110 11101010 011111111 111101011 01110111 111111101 01111111 11011111 0111011111 1111111111 111101011 11101111 1101100111 1111111101 11011011 11110111101 1111101011110 11111011110 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 744 |
Words | 175 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2 |
Lines Amount | 18 |
Letters per line (avg) | 30 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 59 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 17 |
About this poem
I have been trying to start a family for a while now and nothing seems to be happening so I wrote this poem.
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Written on September 13, 2023
Submitted by naomibartonevans on September 13, 2023
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