Analysis of No. 2 Expired

Ramiro Reyna 2002 (Aurora)



No. 2 Expired

No tears to dry, those lifeless eyes,

It’s too late to say goodbye.

Skin, once warm, frostbite cold; lacking hue,

This isn't you.

Derived of life, in winter’s grasp

A fleeting breath, a final gasp.

I fucking hate that you passed.

“I love you” is never enough,

Enough is never enough.  

I miss you so,  

That soft warm hug; fatherly love,

I’m out of luck; toughen up...


Scheme X X X A A B B X C C X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 101 11111101 111111 11111101 1101 01110101 01010101 1101111 11111001 0111001 1111 11111001 1111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 499
Words 120
Sentences 10
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 22
Words per stanza (avg) 5
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Written on October 06, 2023

Submitted on October 06, 2023

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