Analysis of My heart flutters & dreams



With every eye contact and every smile that you give, it gives me a flutter in my heart
that goes thump,thump...

Your smoky eyes have quite the look ahh that smile i find mesmerizing it opens my soul and gives me hope...

Your frame I will always remember,
I wanna be with you  to remember...

My heart has an attraction to yours it flutters when you're near, and when you're far away, it hurts. I yearn to be near you it's like apart of me is lost when your gone.

I don't crush,my heart flutters and flutters more than it truly has.

My heart lights up when i look into your brown bold soul just to let you know.

I dream for some girl time, just you and me,don't you want to be wild and free with me?

Picture riding in the California ocean breeze
sunsets on the hood and more...

I need to get out and explore. That's my goal just to let ya know.

I'm sick of always being down  
I need to get a way with someone I care. I just want to be happy and free with someone who knows me...

but that goal is just a dream that I had, and now I'm back to being sad as it will never ever come true,as I am crazy...

oh, my heart flutters with so many dreams
I hope one day is to have you in it
because i miss the many talks sometimes even get butterflies
that's why my heart flutters and flutters...

I won't tell my secret but you are my hero
a character in many poems before...

by now, you may have guessed
consider your blessed...


Scheme XA A BB X X C D XE C XD D XXXX CE FF
Poetic Form
Metre 11001101001111111010011 111 1101110111111100110110111 11111010 1101111010 1111010111101110111011111111111011111111 111110010111101 111111101111111111 1111111101111110111 101000010101 110101 1111100111111111 1111101 111101111111111100111111 1111101111011111011111010111110 1111011101 1111111101 011101010110110 111110010 111110111110 01000101001 111111 01011
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,454
Words 321
Sentences 18
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 4, 2, 2
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 47
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

I wrote this because I dream of goals that I want to accomplish some day.

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Written on October 01, 2023

Submitted by PoetFeather on October 01, 2023

Modified by PoetFeather on October 01, 2023

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Lenamarie Clark

My name Is Lenamarie Clark, From Arizona. I been writing poetry since age 11,I have well over 150 poems, i write just about daily. Poetry is my story, keeps me going in life! I dont know where I would be if poetry didn't exist. I believe that some where someone needs someone's inspiration... -Lenamarie Clark- more…

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