"Surrender"

Lenamarie Clark 1981 (Indianapolis,Indiana)



I'll never be the same as
my soul is opened.

Her eyes with dark eye shadow
have made me shy and tame.

I surrender my all just for her,
im soft and tender i will not fall when im around her,i win when i surrender.

I'll surrender and will make her my redeemer, my soul mate and keeper, in the mirror i see her reflection i take many steps back.

I'll Surrender my heart for her,my
love for her don't make me the same.

I'm free inside the trap and that's a wrap...

About this poem

Poem is about me surrendering my love to those whom I love ❤

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Written on August 20, 2022

Submitted by PoetFeather on August 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XX XA BB X AA X
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 468
Words 108
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1

Lenamarie Clark

My name Is Lenamarie Clark, From Arizona. I been writing poetry since age 11,I have well over 150 poems, i write just about daily. Poetry is my story, keeps me going in life! I dont know where I would be if poetry didn't exist. I believe that some where someone needs someone's inspiration... -Lenamarie Clark- more…

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