Analysis of No Exceptions



There are no exceptions.
We all experience,
Becoming them, they and the others.
At a time when rules and laws.
Are applied to our daily lives.

There are no exceptions.
Until some among the majority,
Refuse to accept...
A being no different than the rest of us.
Regardless of their status.
And the pretentiousness kept,
Of their effective delusions.

However,
There are some amongst us all,
Who stay a 'they' to remain that way.
With a taking their faith to perceive,
It can be merchandized to sell and disguise.
Done to throw kisses up to God.
In the hope their self righteousness,
God immediately recognizes.

And they take their 'faith' to actually believe,
It can be symbolize and idolize to make...
Heros of themselves.
On a daily basis to create.

They believe under steeples,
Where they assemble and congregate.
Only there God awaits.
For those who assimilate.
Together and not to segregate,
Into divisions making decisions.
Who is deserving of blessings to receive.
Based upon their color and ethnicity.
With imagining that God,
Approves also what it is they physically...
Can identify and see.

Not to know,
GOD IS LIGHT!
Brighter than any.
They have yet to have seen.

And...
Them, they and many others too.
Believe to do unto others,
With an evil hatred shown to be known.
Can be prayed away.
Sunday and throughout each week.
If they prayed to fake it faithfully.
Believing God forgives deceiving.

Even if their faith is faked.
Done to do to deceive and lie.
Hoping their image of themselves represents,
A physical image...
Of God to worship,
To idolize heros they create to symbolize.
With a doing to enforce no exceptions.
Upon the many eyes that are opened wide.
Knowing...
Who has committed betrayal and treason,
To feed and feast.
At their benefit to disqualify...
The truth to deny,
All of humanity as creations of God.
With no exceptions to accept,
Rules to follow and laws to obey...
Gives them, they or others of 'US',
To believe they have achieved a receiving...
Of immortality.
Above being touched to value reality!

'But...
We are not them nor they.
We are the 'Others'.
The CHOSEN ONES!
Here to enforce OUR beliefs!'

'I know.
It must be a sad existence.
To be in your position.
However...
As Justice of The Peace.
Who has been appointed by the people?
I can comprehend your mentalities.
I too grew up to believe in myself.
But on this planet,
My feet stayed to remain grounded.
Whoever it was,
That messed up your heads.
Should be found guilty as well.
But...
You know what?'

'No, Your Honor...
What?'

'Those of them,
Are not the Chosen Ones.
I find guilty for what they have done.
Congratulations!'

'Congratulations for what, Your Honor?'

'For your commitment to admit,
To be as stupid as you are.
And...
Leaving your fingerprints,
All over the proof and evidence of it!
Oh...
Yes.
By the way.
Would you happen to know this hymn.
Swing Low Sweet Chariot?
(singing) Coming for to carry me home...'

'No, Your Honor.
I can not say I do.'

'Well...
There's one coming for all of you.
Taking you straight to prison.
And it is my sincere hope,
You find the accommodations worth the wait!'


Scheme Abcxx Adeffea Gxhijkfx ixxl xlxllaidkdd mxdx Nocxhxdp xqxxxjaxprxqqkehfpdd Shcax mbrGxxaxsxxxtSs Gs xara g uxNxumxhxsx Go torxl
Poetic Form
Metre 111010 110100 010110010 1011101 101110101 111010 0110100100 01101 010110010111 0101110 0011 11010010 10 1110111 110110111 101011101 111111001 11110111 00111100 101000100 01111110001 1111001011 10101 101010101 1011010 11010010 101101 111010 01001110 0101010010 11010110101 10111000100 1010011 011011111000 101001 111 111 10110 111111 0 11010101 01111010 1110101111 11101 100111 111111100 010101010 1011111 11110101 1011010101 010010 11110 11010101110 10101011010 01010111101 10 11010010010 1101 111001010 01101 110100101011 11010101 111001101 11111011 10111010010 10100 0110111010 1 111111 11010 0101 11011001 11 11101010 1101010 10 110101 1110101010 110111 111110101 11110 11110110 01011 11111 1111011 1 111 1110 1 111 110101 111011111 0010 001011110 11010101 11110111 0 10110 11001010011 1 1 101 11101111 111100 1010111011 1110 111111 1 11101111 1011110 0111011 1100010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 3,114
Words 669
Sentences 88
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 5, 7, 8, 4, 11, 4, 8, 20, 5, 15, 2, 4, 1, 11, 2, 5
Lines Amount 112
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 149
Words per stanza (avg) 34
Font size:
 

Written on September 12, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on September 12, 2023

Modified by lpahtillah on September 12, 2023

3:20 min read
5

Discuss this Lawrence S. Pertillar poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "No Exceptions" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 16 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/168823/no-exceptions>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    15
    days
    5
    hours
    20
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Which of the following was the last to evolve?
    A Epic poetry
    B Tragedy
    C Invective
    D Dithyramb