Analysis of My Mother and Me



You are sometimes happy,
But most of the time angry.
You try your best to make a living for this family.
Sometimes you are under stress I understand,
I forget you are human but so am I,
We love each other to the moon and back,
I sometimes feel like i disappoint you and you  never fail to mention when I do.
You held me for  nine months this is true,
You sheltered and clothed me too and sometimes it me and you,
But today it was just you.
My mother and I


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Poetic Form
Metre 110110 1110110 11111101011100 0111101101 10111101111 1111010101 10111101101101110111 111111111 11001110011101 1011111 11001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 458
Words 103
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 351
Words per stanza (avg) 95

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It’s about a girl and her mom

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Written on August 11, 2023

Submitted by obagshobowale08 on August 11, 2023

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